Wanted! Readers who can give me feedback on this sample.
Daria Jones
You probably already know about Joe Vitale's Hypnotic Writing books and ebooks and you may even use the techniques in your own copy writing. Why not help me out with your expertise?
Your feedback is just the thing I'm looking for to turn a rough draft into something awesome still, no part of this sample may be used without my expressed consent.
Okay, here it goes.